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arte
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POKE-JJ
Joined: 25 Feb 2009 Posts: 1931 Location: Vancouver, BC, Canada
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Posted: Thu Sep 09, 2010 5:38 am Post subject: Re: Young Breezy and Ryles the Great |
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I love Experimental Fuzz-Folk Technical Indiecore Jazzgrind Funkdeath Rapecore Prog Metal!
Also awesome song because it is about me. _________________
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Nikolai3035
Joined: 29 Oct 2006 Posts: 581 Location: Fargo, ND
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Posted: Thu Sep 09, 2010 6:10 am Post subject: |
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This is potentially the greatest thing I have ever heard in my entire life ... Ever. _________________
OG. I''''m old now, my fingers don''''t work like they used to. |
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Vampyromaniac
Joined: 08 Feb 2008 Posts: 1216
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Posted: Thu Sep 09, 2010 6:51 am Post subject: |
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That pterodactyl told Jake what for.
First thing I'd focus on guys would be sound quality. It kind of sounded sped-up, but I couldn't tell for sure, also I wasn't sure whether there was real guitar in there or just some synths. Vocals aren't good imo, and though the music is technical it doesn't progress much. switch it up more throughout the song, especially if you're going for a grindcore type sound (vaginal unicorn is the one I'm using as a basis for that.) Nice song and album titles though. _________________
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SteroidPirate
Joined: 08 Jul 2008 Posts: 651 Location: Winnipeg, MB.
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Posted: Thu Sep 09, 2010 3:54 pm Post subject: |
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YOU'RE A FUCKIN' CANADIAN (JAKE) IS THE BEST THING I HAVE EVER HEARD. _________________
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arte
Joined: 29 Feb 2008 Posts: 848
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Posted: Fri Sep 10, 2010 12:37 am Post subject: |
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Vampyromaniac wrote: |
First thing I'd focus on guys would be sound quality.
Well we are using some of the most high tech equipment available to consumers today (the usb mic that came with my beatles rock band bundle) so I don't think there's much we can do in that department
It kind of sounded sped-up, but I couldn't tell for sure,
We did speed up Carnal Nordic Mirror and the breakdown of Vaginal Unicorn (but not the sweeping part, I can totally sweep that fast). We would have just done another take at a faster tempo but we have this policy where we only do one take per song then call it good
also I wasn't sure whether there was real guitar in there or just some synths.
No synths, everything you hear is guitar
Vocals aren't good imo, and though the music is technical it doesn't progress much. switch it up more throughout the song, especially if you're going for a grindcore type sound (vaginal unicorn is the one I'm using as a basis for that.) Nice song and album titles though.
We will certainly take your constructive criticism into account, thanks |
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MSH-Hitman
Joined: 27 Aug 2007 Posts: 4481 Location: Florida
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Posted: Fri Sep 10, 2010 1:20 am Post subject: |
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Some things were never meant to be recorded XD
Nice avatar though ;D |
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karatechess
Joined: 25 May 2008 Posts: 977
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Posted: Fri Sep 10, 2010 3:09 am Post subject: |
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Dear God. The stuff that sounded like inward singing about broke my speakers, but other then that, the Canadian song was cool. Um, I don't much care for the vocals on the others, but to each his own. I'm not even... I don't even know. Good work. |
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arte
Joined: 29 Feb 2008 Posts: 848
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Posted: Sun Oct 17, 2010 5:59 am Post subject: |
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new album! go listen! |
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inv4der
Joined: 16 Sep 2007 Posts: 9658 Location: Meridian, ID
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Posted: Sun Oct 17, 2010 12:58 pm Post subject: |
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I will say that the instrumentation in Double Robot War, Time Warp and Austin and Rylie Being Assholes was legitimately enjoyable. I'm not sure what I think of the majority of the vocals though.
Seriously, though that slow acoustic guitar and electric guitar sweeps thing in Time Warp was pretty cool. As was the entirety of Austin and Rylie Being Assholes. _________________
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Yewb
Joined: 10 Jan 2008 Posts: 3020 Location: Plymouth, UK
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Posted: Sun Oct 17, 2010 1:25 pm Post subject: |
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As everyone seems to have said, the only real problems you have are recording quality (although trust me, I know it's not easy on a budget) and vocals. I'd really like this if the sound quality was a little better, especially on the instrumental parts. _________________
expertwin wrote: | ShadoWolf wrote: | expertwin wrote: | I just want to, you know, get my name out there. BTW, it updates every Thursday, Friday, and Saturday. Was just the first two, decided to do Saturdays as well. | Serious advice now: No-one likes indecision in their work, so find what you like that you're even remotely good at, and stick with it. Don't flit from one thing to another, because that just smacks of a large lack of determination and drive. And people don't like you for that, and won't remember you for it. I mean, I get that you have a plucky spirit and a willingness to try new things, but there's a limit, man. | I might knock it down to just Thursday and Friday. |
JOE2210 wrote: | Leave me alone, I have been drinking and your made up words mean nothing to me. |
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TheLonging
Joined: 07 Apr 2008 Posts: 4191
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Posted: Sun Oct 17, 2010 4:27 pm Post subject: |
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better than The Beatles themselves _________________
I wanna thank you for letting me be myself.
NavyCherub wrote: | AshleyWilis wrote: | hi for me Its something different...
It seems like Full sound full combo...
I mean It show passion and determination for my guitar | Smoke weed erryday. |
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NavyCherub
Joined: 28 May 2008 Posts: 3396
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Posted: Sun Oct 17, 2010 5:35 pm Post subject: |
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in the future
in the year
twenty seventy seventy six...
slutty is def. your best song. _________________
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CGC002
Joined: 10 Feb 2010 Posts: 46 Location: Seattle, WA
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Posted: Tue Oct 19, 2010 5:56 pm Post subject: |
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SteroidPirate wrote: | YOU'RE A FUCKIN' CANADIAN (JAKE) IS THE BEST THING I HAVE EVER HEARD. |
IN CANADA MILK COMES FROM BAGS.
I love this. "Slutty" is one of the best comed- I mean Experimental Folk Technical Deathcore Jazzgrind Funkgrind Paincore Black Metal songs I've ever heard. You guys should definitely do something live, I'd pay to see that. _________________
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Morkai
Joined: 13 May 2006 Posts: 189 Location: Under the bridge. With Duncan.
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Posted: Wed Oct 20, 2010 5:57 pm Post subject: |
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Fuck. we might just do it for free, you devotee, you. <3 _________________
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