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Subrick
Joined: 22 Mar 2008 Posts: 1382 Location: Terryville, CT
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Posted: Tue Sep 09, 2008 2:36 am Post subject: A little song I wrote. |
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Tell me what you think.
Excuse All The Blood
Excuse all the blood!
Sorry for shooting indoors! (x2)
Suicidal!
Depression!
Rape the villiage!
Pilliage them all!
Within the woods
Lies a wood house
Melancholy
Psychomantis!
Slicing!
Cutting!
Skull made necklace
From his remains!
Mayhem!
Carnage!
Excuse all the blood!
Sorry for shooting indoors! _________________
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CleverTangent
Joined: 03 Sep 2007 Posts: 965 Location: North of Atlanta, Georgia
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Posted: Tue Sep 09, 2008 2:40 am Post subject: |
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I'm sorry... I wouldn't consider that a song. Even metal singers try to incorporate some sort of poetry in their songs.
It seems like you just threw a bunch of violent words together, honestly. (Hey, you wanted to know what I think...)
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bjwdestroyer wrote: | So who are you planning to have sing this little gem of yours? Barry Manilow? |
I can't stop laughing. _________________
Man is least himself when he talks in his own person. Give him a mask, and he will tell you the truth. ~Oscar Wilde
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bjwdestroyer
Joined: 30 Jun 2007 Posts: 4785 Location: I have more posts than you, who cares where I am.
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Posted: Tue Sep 09, 2008 2:42 am Post subject: |
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So who are you planning to have sing this little gem of yours? Barry Manilow? |
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SuomiMetal
Joined: 11 Oct 2007 Posts: 527 Location: MO
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Posted: Tue Sep 09, 2008 2:43 am Post subject: |
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CleverTangent wrote: | It seems like you just threw a bunch of violent words together, honestly. (Hey, you wanted to know what I think...) |
Perhaps he's trying to write a grindcore song? |
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Subrick
Joined: 22 Mar 2008 Posts: 1382 Location: Terryville, CT
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Posted: Tue Sep 09, 2008 2:44 am Post subject: |
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@ bjwdestroyer
One of my 2 bands. That's the problem. My first band, which I write more stuff like this, is an experimental death metal/nu metal/prog. metal band. My second band, which I write stuff that's more personal, is a metalcore band. I read it to them over the phone and they both liked it. _________________
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jordanpwnsme
Joined: 06 Jun 2008 Posts: 769 Location: USA, I'm on NTSC
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Posted: Tue Sep 09, 2008 2:46 am Post subject: |
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Subrick wrote: | @ bjwdestroyer
One of my 2 bands. That's the problem. My first band, which I write more stuff like this, is an experimental death metal/nu metal/prog. metal band. My second band, which I write stuff that's more personal, is a metalcore band. I read it to them over the phone and they both liked it. |
Maybe they said they liked it so you wouldn't kill them?
* is scared of OP * _________________
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GuitarHailz
Joined: 11 Jun 2007 Posts: 4910 Location: Austin, Texas
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Posted: Tue Sep 09, 2008 2:51 am Post subject: |
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©bjwdestroyer _________________
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